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blind34_1 · 01-14-2003, 11:10 AM

All you need is an intro right? Try this something where you build suspense before you actually introduce yourself. For example, if you are at the track a lot, write something like this:

Two cars pull up to the line at the Boresville Race track. THe left lane pre stages, followed by the right. The amber lights drop to green and in a roar of engines launching and tires squeeling, the race is on. Both cars are neck and neck, until the left lane posts a fantastic time. Driver gets out, with a look of definate satisfaction. The drivers name is ChrisCantSkate, and this is what I do on my weekends....
blah blah blah

Yeah that story sucks, and obviously you want to make it as realistic as possible. But you get the idea; no cheesy "hi my name is" garbage. Although juvenile's intro was pretty good also. Try something like that, but make it interesting.

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01-14-2003, 11:10 AM	#1
blind34_1 Registered User Join Date: May 2002 Location: IL Age: 41 Posts: 1,813	All you need is an intro right? Try this something where you build suspense before you actually introduce yourself. For example, if you are at the track a lot, write something like this: Two cars pull up to the line at the Boresville Race track. THe left lane pre stages, followed by the right. The amber lights drop to green and in a roar of engines launching and tires squeeling, the race is on. Both cars are neck and neck, until the left lane posts a fantastic time. Driver gets out, with a look of definate satisfaction. The drivers name is ChrisCantSkate, and this is what I do on my weekends.... blah blah blah Yeah that story sucks, and obviously you want to make it as realistic as possible. But you get the idea; no cheesy "hi my name is" garbage. Although juvenile's intro was pretty good also. Try something like that, but make it interesting.