props for a first attempt... if I could give some constructive criticism I'd suggest trying to match the speed of the music with the on-screen action.  I personally feel fast tempo music should only be used with high-action or high-speed video.  If you're going to use still photos I'd suggest rotating through them at higher speed or try to use some effects on them.  I don't mean to bag on your work, but that's just my .02
